Simplified whale speach

Otherwise this really needs quite a lot of time and the updated speach isn't that unofficial.

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/script.js b/script.js
index c51e6c2..6e177af 100644
--- a/script.js
+++ b/script.js
@@ -108,34 +108,30 @@ particlesJS("starBackground", {
     Whale Partyy!
  */
 const whaleDialog =
-    "Ah … ! What’s happening? it thought.\n" +
+    "Aaaahhhhhhhhh! Wooooooooooh!\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "Er, excuse me, who am I?\n" +
+    "What's happening?\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "Hello?\n" +
+    "Who am I?\n" +
     "\n" +
     "Why am I here? What’s my purpose in life?\n" +
     "\n" +
     "What do I mean by who am I?\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "Calm down, get a grip now … oh! this is an interesting sensation, what is it? It’s a sort of … yawning, tingling sensation in my … my … well I suppose I’d better start finding names for things if I want to make any headway in what for the sake of what I shall call an argument I shall call the world, so let’s call it my stomach.\n" +
+    "Okay, okay, calm down and get a grip now. Ooh, that is an interesting sensation. What is it? It’s a sort of tingling in my - well I suppose I better start finding names for things. Let's call it a tail! Yeah, tail!\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "Good. Ooooh, it’s getting quite strong. And hey, what’s about this whistling roaring sound going past what I’m suddenly going to call my head? Perhaps I can call that … wind! Is that a good name? It’ll do … perhaps I can find a better name for it later when I’ve found out what it’s for. It must be something very important because there certainly seems to be a hell of a lot of it. Hey! What’s this thing? This … let’s call it a tail – yeah, tail. Hey! I can can really thrash it about pretty good can’t I? Wow! Wow! That feels great! Doesn’t seem to achieve very much but I’ll probably find out what it’s for later on. Now – have I built up any coherent picture of things yet?\n" +
+    "And hey, what’s this roaring sound whooshing past what I’m suddenly going to call my head? Wind! Is that a good name? It’ll do.\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "No.\n" +
-    "\n" +
-    "Never mind, hey, this is really exciting, so much to find out about, so much to look forward to, I’m quite dizzy with anticipation …\n" +
+    "Yeah, this is really exciting. I’m dizzy with anticipation!\n" +
     "\n" +
     "Or is it the wind?\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "There really is a lot of that now isn’t it?\n" +
-    "\n" +
-    "And wow! Hey! What’s this thing suddenly coming towards me very fast? Very very fast. So big and flat and round, it needs a big wide sounding name like … ow … ound … round … ground! That’s it! That’s a good name – ground!\n" +
+    "Theres an awful lot of that now isn’t it?\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "I wonder if it will be friends with me?\n" +
+    "And what’s this thing suddenly coming towards me very fast? So big and flat and round, it needs a big wide sounding name like 'ow', 'ownge', 'round', 'ground'! That’s it! Ground! Ha!\n" +
     "\n" +
-    "And the rest, after a sudden wet thud, was silence.";
-const flowerPotDialog = "Not again...";
+    "I wonder if it will be friends with me? Hello Ground!\n";
+const flowerPotDialog = "Oh no, not again...";
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